Manga Advice?

So, I've decided to draw a small, five-or-six-chapter manga. However, I need advice. ^^' Not on drawing, I think I've got that down pat, but rather on going through processes such as paneling, pacing, etc.

I also need an easy-to-write-with cancer for it

I'll post the first chapter when it's done ^^'

Any advice will be helpful~

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